Thread: Hi, Can anyone give me some advice on my blog please

Hi,
I have several review blogs on 1st page of google yahoo and bing, get about 100 or so hits a day, but not making any sales, think i need advice on monitizing it or something, any advice would be great

Thanks
Justin

Hi

Could you PM me the sites and I will try and help you

I have attached 2 images which show what the sites looks like on my monitor. The menu bar uses 2 lines and on one of them the site is too far left

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The url's that 42lgled wants people to review are as follows :
42lgled.com offers 42 lg led 42 lg led tv
HOW TO GET A SIX PACK, The Truth About Flat Abs
globalsclub.com Offers Free List Building Systems

Any one elses help would be appreciated as I wouldn't class myself as expert in this field

hmmm. Firstly I want to say that no matter how much you change it according to other people's views, in the end you need to be happy with it as well.

42 LG LED:
Have a look at your title (heading on the page), it says : 42 LG LED, Really Is An amazing Buy, 42 LG LED TV.

You don't really need to have the added 42 LG LED, and in the HTML, it would look spammy.
You're using wordpress, with the SEO pack from Yoast, which is ok, but you need to be careful, as overdoing it can also reflect on your site content as well as your page ranking. What I mean by that is Yoast tells you when you don't have your keywords in specific areas etc. but doubling up on them is overkill slightly.

With conversions, I would seriously take a look at the way you have worded your content. With some of the pages here, you are either trying too hard to convince people that the screen is amazing, or, you are playing that "I am going to reveal" card, and that can turn many people off.

That being said, there is still a long way to go, and even if you're getting 100 visitors a day, its almost impossible to get a 100% conversion rate straight off the bat. You have to tweak and change content, keywords etc. in such a way that people will trust you enough to buy from you, and because the services and products you are offering are literally found all over the net, it makes it a little harder for you, not to mention the niches being really hard to rank well if you look at competition. The only real advice I can give is to find a unique way to market these products and services, that make people pay attention, and want to buy them.

Good luck with your venture.